December 14, 2011 01:44:03 AM
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Brian

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She was beautiful. I didn't know what that word meant, I still might not, but I know that she was. Sitting near her on the bus was some sort of drug. My heart beat slower. Her legs and the colors she wore were things beyond the realm of vocabulary. One day, Jim said to me, "If the only way I could have sex with her was to fuck her until I died, I would do it." Hours, and high school hours at that, spent studying her had allowed my mind to process only one true and undeniable fact: Christine was beautiful.

Comments [2]

from "norman": i think "Anon" meant the above comment for my poeticwrite as it dealt with computer programming whereas your narrative deals with another kind of "it"; beauty as it for your story's character.

Dec. 15 2011 07:48 PM
Anon

Very interesting poem! Being that I work in the IT field, I loved it, and saw it as a program in poetic motion! Brilliant!

Dec. 14 2011 03:04 PM

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