December 14, 2011 12:23:39 AM
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Richard
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The problem with short stories is that they just cut short. Readers get a kick out of being left on a precipice but it's a little forced and lame. Why not just say what needs to be said and be done. That's when I realized I left the window open and I heard the sound of dragging footsteps, shadows began seeping under the door. Damn, I shouldn't have used all the garlic for the fettuccine .
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from “norman”: ah, a writer who has stepped back and injected a bit of situational perspective similar to an actor looking into the camera to directly address the audience; interesting. and, then, is grabbed by events in situ -- in situational comedy!
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